criticism
the introduction is kinda slow for a four-minute-long track. depending on your entire song's length i would say that determines how progressive it needs to be. it took me until 1:40 to start enjoying it, because that's a really appealing synth. maybe it could use some chorus filtering or reverb?
drums definitely need improvement, though. i'm not really a fan of your snare sound since it's so stuffy and plain, but the clap is clean. add some crashes and open hats or different percs.
and your transitions are just "one section, another section, etc." like. it gets very boring quick. listen to most of deadmau5's work how he has fade-ins and reverb decay changes.